舟山岱山周边酒店:2007年高考英语作文

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　　假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：

　　年龄；

　　性别；

　　爱好(旅游、运动、宠物等)。

　　注意：

　　1.词数100左右；

　　2.可以适当增加细节；

　　3.开头语已为你写好。

　　Dear Peter,

　　I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

　　Best regards,

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　　Dear Peter,

　　I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

　　Since Im quite interested in English, I would like to make an English pen friend to improve my writing. Can you introduce one to me? My ideal pen friend should be of my age, and a boy will be better. A boy who likes traveling and football will be a good candidate.

　　In my opinion, the guy of my age will share almost the same experiences as me and it is easier to talk to each other. We can share our feelings of traveling and football. If possible, I hope that he likes pets. Hope you can find me an ideal pen friend.Thank you.

　　Best regards,

　　Li Hua

　　名师点评：

　　本文属于比较“平”的文章，即稳中求胜。文章没有华丽的词语，但是使用了一些短语和结构，能够获得老师的欣赏。首句是个原因状语从句。文章也运用了定语从句来修饰boy，比较好。If possible这个省略句则表明作者对这类状语从句的熟悉。

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　　好词：1. candidate n.候选人2.share with 与…分享

　　好句：In my opinion, the guy of my age will share almost the same experiences as me and it is easier to talk to each other.在我看来，像我这样年龄的男生和我会有更多的共同语言。

　　Dear Peter,

　　I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

　　I have been learning English for two years and I hope to find an English pen friend so that I can get more improvement. Can you help me to find one?

　　Id like to have a boy, who is of my age and is fond of traveling and sports, to be my pen friend. In my opinion, people of the same age often have something to exchange. Thats why I want him to be of my age. If he likes doggy, that would be better because I can tell him something about my little doggy.Id be very thankful if you can help me. Hope to hear from you!

　　Best regards,

　　Li Hua

　　名师点评：

　　从整体上来说，本文写得还是符合要求的，内容完整，要点和结构也很齐全。语言的使用不在于华丽的辞藻而在于其一些复杂句子的组织。最值得我们学习的就是像好词和好句中列举的表达法。全文流畅而连贯，适合于模仿。

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　　好词1.improvement n 改进2.do sb. a favor 帮助某人3. doggy n.小狗

　　好句1. Id like to have a boy, who is of my age and is fond of traveling and sports, to be my pen friend.我想寻找一个和我年纪相仿，喜欢旅游、体育的男孩来做我的笔友。

　　好处：of my age 年纪相仿；be fond of 喜欢。

　　2.Thats why I want him to be of my age，这就是为什么我希望笔友跟我年纪相仿的原因。

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　　一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容应该包括：

　　地点：距白山入口处500米；

　　房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天；

　　双人间(共15间)，150元/天；

　　热水淋浴；

　　餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡)；

　　游泳池：全天免费开放；

　　欢迎预定。

　　注意：

　　词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；

　　可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

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　　Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

　　Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

　　500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 doubleperson rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

　　Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

　　名师点评：

　　本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。

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　　好词1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

　　好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.

　　所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。

　　Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

　　Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

　　The hotel is located 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, a very convenient position to go sightseeing in the Baishan Mountain. There are two kinds of rooms for service: singleperson room, 20 in total and RMB 100 yuan per day and doubleperson room, 15 in total and RMB 150 yuan per day. The hot water bath is provided as well. We serve both Chinses and western food in the restaurant as well as coffee and tea in the cafe. All are provided in a short time. The swimming pool, which is open for the whole day, is free for you to come.

　　We accept booking rooms ahead of time. So come and enjoy!

　　名师点评：

　　本文叙述比较详细，使用了比较复杂的句式和短语。首句的伴随状语用得很好。在介绍房间类型时，作者使用了简短的对比句式，很精炼。作者还使用了定语从句which，同时在描述酒店的两种价格的时候也很恰当，语句生动而不重复。

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　　好词1. sightseeing n.观光旅游2. book v.登记；预订

　　好句1. The hotel is located 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, a very convenient position to go sightseeing in the Baishan Mountain. 宾馆在距离白山入口处500米的地方，这对于参观白山来说是一个很方便的位置。

　　好处：伴随状语的使用很到位。

　　2. The swimming pool, which is open for the whole day, is free for you to come.

　　游泳池全天免费开放。

　　好处：which引导了非限制性定语从句。