钱包里面放避孕套 意义:四六级写作亮点—如何吸引阅卷老师眼球

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四六级写作,不仅句子写得要正确、要好,更重要的是好句子要被阅卷老师看到,要吸引他们的眼球。

 

1、数字阅了一天卷的阅卷老师一眼就能在一大堆英文字母中看到数字。

如:

In recent years, people in growing numbers in city X are seeking to travel abroad. According to the above table, the past 10 years has witnessed a sharp increase in the number of people who traveled abroad from 10,000 to 120,000 between 1995 and 2005.

 

2、大写字母比如WHO,三个大写字母连在一起,老师也定会一眼就能看见。

如:

According to a recent survey conducted by CPB—Chinese Publishing Bureau, the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the total kind of E-books from 3,400 to 856,000.

 

3、一些特殊的标点符号如引号、问号、破折号、括号也更容易引起阅卷老师的注意。

如:

According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, a high proportion (838 percent) of students admit that discussions help them develop the ability to analyze and solve problems, stimulating their creativities.

 

4、加词。如:

给“增长”加一个表示幅度的副词“快”,大部分人会想到用“quickly”,如果还用这个单词,效果就会平平,如果用“rapidly”的话,就稍微好一些,但如果用“sharply”的话,就会很生动。

 

5、在句后加从句,特别是非限制性定语从句。如:

which witnesses a flow of travelers as much as 1,350,000 on average every day(有目击者称那里每天的平均客流量为135万人)。客流量如此之大,连阅卷老师看了也会感叹的。

 

6、在句前加状语。在主句前加一个“,”,逗号前加“According to a recent survey”(根据一个最近的调查),如果能加上是由哪家权威机构做出来的,就更有说服力了。

我们把以上方法总结在一起,会形成一个句子模板。如:

According to a recent survey conducted by CTA—Chinese Tourism Association, the number of foreigners who travel to China increased sharply from 2,363,000 to 6,980,000 between 2000 and 2006, which equals to the total population of Traq.

 

这个句子模板就是我们得高分的捷径,就是吸引阅卷老师眼球的那块磁石。

 

这样的句子亮点已经够多了,阅卷老师看到这样的句子,分数会给高高哦!童鞋们,好好练习吧~~~